So I am posting a painting I finished I earlier this week.

Out my Window
This painting gave me a fit. The clouds were far too dark so I took the piece of Mr Clean to them and lightened them. Then I lightened them some more with a white inktense crayon but I didn't wet it like you normally would so it stayed bright white.

But I think perhaps there's still too much sky. Sometimes you have to crop a painting to improve it. Here it is cropped. Which one do you like better??